I am not the best writer
and never will be.
I am not the fittest or thinnest,
I make a shit cup of tea.
I am not the best kisser or lover,
I don’t read as much as I should.
I smoke even though I quit
My flirting is misunderstood.
I skip class because I can,
I don’t see myself as a 26 year old man,
I spend too much money on food,
I hate my body in the nude,
I drink until I can’t see straight,
I am held back by my problem with my weight,
I am tactless and often disliked,
If a guy smiles at me I think he’s been spiked.
But I am the best me that I can be,
As you are the best you.
I write with more than fingers,
I kiss with more than lips,
I see with more than eyes,
I am more than a body and hips.
I am happy that I am me,
For if I wasn’t the best me that I can be,
I would not have you.
As featured at One Shot Wednesday Week 35: http://onestoppoetry.com/2011/03/one-shot-wednesday-week-35.html
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Jam, that IS the nicest poem you've written and one of *the* wisest poems I've ever read! Xxx
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks hun! :) It's very different for me- it even rhymes! I'm glad you like it. :) xx
ReplyDeleteThis is a sweet poem. You are "more than..." Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Lori. :) Yes, it is my only poem that has ever been considered sweet. I like that though. Hehe. :)
ReplyDeletedude that is awesome...the best you can be is you...and you embrace that...
ReplyDeleteThanks man. :) It didn't start off as a poem of acceptance, but ended up that way. Amazing how writing can be the ultimate therapy. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome...
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Well written, I like how it turns on;
ReplyDelete...But I am the best me that I can be,
As you are the best you...
and then this is fabulous;
...I write with more than fingers,
I kiss with more than lips,
I see with more than eyes,
I am more than a body and hips...
Good stuff!
Hi James
ReplyDeleteSelf actualization at its best.. I enjoyed your take on your self... a search of peace starts from innerself...
I liked your realizations in the words here...
'I write with more than fingers,
I kiss with more than lips,
I see with more than eyes,
I am more than a body and hips.'
Perfect way to look at yourself... of what you are rather than who you see in the mirror...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Thanks for all your comments guys, I'm really glad you like the poem. :)
ReplyDeletelovely sentiments, confidence is vital to one's happy living...
ReplyDeletestay blessed...
Please feel free to share 1 to 3 poems with our potluck poetry today, first time participants could use old poems or poems unrelated to our theme, Thanks..
Happy Monday!
Thanks for your feedback Jingle Poetry- I have just submitted a new poem to your site. :)
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