For three years I debated,
shifted mind and tried,
so I wrote the letter.
Precision of word clarified my ramblings, it was done.
Finality on paper,
my signature binding me to my word.
No more a whirlwind of thought drifting at terminal speed,
the letter said it all
in just one page, two hundred words.
Branded wonderings,
there ‘till rot creeps in
like cancer.
On the envelope I write her name. But the letter is mine.
Unforgotten, but laid to rest,
the encased letter lays in it’s paper tomb.
Seven letters spell h-e-r,
but I own these words, they are my creation.
Ownership not for sale,
no paper torn ash will fall here.
She cannot read my letter.
Her name is
only fiction.
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very interesting piece! and very true
ReplyDeleteenjoyed this very much
thank you
awesome,
ReplyDeletefictional name?
tricky games...
smiles.
smart poetry, A++
Thank you for your kind comments. :)
ReplyDeleteI like this poem very much and am looking for words to say why, but can't find them, so there.
ReplyDeleteYeah, really interesting. A love letter to a wish, perhaps?
ReplyDeletenice! here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/04/27/cheesecake/
ReplyDeleteWell expressed... Especially how it revolved round what could and not be reached..
ReplyDeleteSo, well, there, take a break from her now.. I am inviting you over for a little drink... *wink*
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Hope to see you and Cheers!!!
eloquent writing...
ReplyDeletesmiles.
I love the way you bring fiction to the fore-front. she
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing with One Shot
perhaps the letter is to th dream that may one day come true...as opposed to just being ash...nice one shot...
ReplyDeleteThanks guys- I have tried to look at everyone's poems here too, but I haven't been able to find some. Feel free to send me links!
ReplyDeleteThis poem actually took shape on Sunday when I wrote my letter of resignation from my current job. It was sitting on my desk in an envelope with my manager's name on and I was debating if I would actually give it to her. Then I was wondering if she was to see it, if she would assume ownership of it.
very nice. owning one's words, what power this poem holds.
ReplyDeleteThank you Marian. :)
ReplyDeleteCathartic to write things out, to say them even, with no NEED to be heard except by yourself. I''m wondering about that fictional name. You've got me curious.
ReplyDeleteHi James
ReplyDeleteA great fiction.. and yes its all so true.. your words I can relate to a lot. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful imagery...
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Thanks guys- you're all very kind! Some interesting readings. :)
ReplyDeleteEmotional, but restrained - superb work.
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ReplyDeleteThanks Steve and Ina. :) I'll go check out your blog now Ina.
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