tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post2116580608434798504..comments2023-09-08T02:25:22.900-07:00Comments on Choice was an extravagance: LondonJames Christopher Sheppardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15965046940711577998noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-21748889051710342302011-03-17T17:35:50.629-07:002011-03-17T17:35:50.629-07:00Excellent, with a perfect capper line.Excellent, with a perfect capper line.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-56754058355656896342011-03-10T02:20:52.471-08:002011-03-10T02:20:52.471-08:00well with you on this...I am an essex man...worked...well with you on this...I am an essex man...worked in the city for 16 years...and we know onky too well off its overspill done this way...really good poem...good flow too...cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-46477327420366116552011-03-09T15:47:33.321-08:002011-03-09T15:47:33.321-08:00@Kolembo- Thank you! Haha! I strive to achieve suc...@Kolembo- Thank you! Haha! I strive to achieve such visuals in my poetry. :)<br /><br />@Dustus- Thanks for the insight- I think you just pointed something out to me that I had done without realising. :)<br /><br />@Wordasunder- LOL! Love it. :P<br /><br />Thanks for taking the time people!James Christopher Sheppardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15965046940711577998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-60532254422333965632011-03-09T15:28:54.253-08:002011-03-09T15:28:54.253-08:00Great observations. Sorry you had to get so wet to...Great observations. Sorry you had to get so wet to write it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-49462405936170427272011-03-09T05:24:28.757-08:002011-03-09T05:24:28.757-08:00Indeed, a bleak poem. However, the element of sarc...Indeed, a bleak poem. However, the element of sarcasm reveals a unique poetic voice. Excellent depiction of the city as seen from the vantage of depression, though it's the humor in the sarcasm that seems to reveal hope.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-21489689252330269762011-03-09T01:00:56.509-08:002011-03-09T01:00:56.509-08:00...‘Welcome to London’
the captain said.
‘One of ......‘Welcome to London’ <br />the captain said.<br />‘One of the biggest and best cities in the world’...<br /><br />Super. Like the start of a film...a fantastic animation of the story of the dark figure in the lights.<br /><br />Great construction, it's a great poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-82807451508711728022011-03-08T18:34:01.034-08:002011-03-08T18:34:01.034-08:00Thanks for the feedback guys! I've gotta say, ...Thanks for the feedback guys! I've gotta say, I think this poem is a pretty bleak point of view, but it doesn't sound like everyone is seeing the same thing which is interesting. Thanks again- feedback is so important. :)James Christopher Sheppardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15965046940711577998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-15405712889873841132011-03-08T18:20:16.059-08:002011-03-08T18:20:16.059-08:00Boy, your descriptions are nice...
I really liked...Boy, your descriptions are nice...<br /><br />I really liked this line, "and curse the dry that don't waste a second on you..." :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-49540055110561763362011-03-08T07:57:04.995-08:002011-03-08T07:57:04.995-08:00ha. love the tongue in cheek nature of this...all ...ha. love the tongue in cheek nature of this...all the junk you have to go through to get to the greatest...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-49708804581234206942011-03-08T03:32:11.563-08:002011-03-08T03:32:11.563-08:00Structure works really well! Love the way you'...Structure works really well! Love the way you've broken it up xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-49514935071015745732011-03-08T01:08:17.530-08:002011-03-08T01:08:17.530-08:00great take on a 'nice' city.. thank you fo...great take on a 'nice' city.. thank you for sharing this.. my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3700172742445398311.post-73849029560274015182011-03-07T18:19:09.648-08:002011-03-07T18:19:09.648-08:00love London.
what an inviting piece. enjoyed your...love London.<br /><br />what an inviting piece. enjoyed your friendliness.<br /><br />A++<br /><br />have fun.<br /><br />Jingle<br />http://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com